I enjoyed this one bud, i liked the way you stayed on course throughout the piece and had some pretty insightful bars, brought a freshness to a subject that's been done before. You could feel that you took more time on this one than you have on previous verses, and it was actually a pretty entertaining my verse, my challenge to you would be to start branching out and stepping away from just normal rap subjects, keep your mind on and get creative buddy you're on the right track!
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