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Originally Posted by Plot
Your so terrible at this craft. You honestly suck and should do something else.
Your like the shit kid at the skate ramp thats been going down for 5 years and
still cant drop in, and everyone makes fun of. I mean your past being sarcastic
about you dont take on any feedback or help and I dont think you even read anyone
elses work. Look at the column of I's on the left side of your verse! Your shit.
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I do agree with plot that you need to slow down and actually read the feedback people give you, you need to also read around the open mic forum and study the style of other writers and reconstruct your writtens because in a more positive note i do like your subject matter, it's unique, do i think you can expand your reach outside of biblical topics and references? Yes i do, I'm wrapping up a collab between us that took you in a different route then you're used to. It's doable and i think you need to stop being so repetitive, the repetition adds nothing to the piece, you obviously have a wide vocabulary so dig out some more unique words out of the vault. I think you could be dope but you need to refine your craft big time. Keep pushing