[Mike Wrecka]

quick vote sorry guys

nigma - I liked this verse. but you didn't have your normal great multis and flow in this piece like yours usually do. actually the end rhymes weren't that great in some spots. like right off the bat

Rodent grown in a mouse hole, exposure lone to his household
When he goes and strays outdoors, he grows a changed outlook

that doesn't work for me. with that being said I think your take on the topic was incredible. and the verse really captured my attention. you have great word usage in the middle and beginning of each line. and for the most part good end rhymes it just seems like once in a while you put a word at the end that doesn't rhyme with the previous, then you go back to the rhyme scheme. but ya I enjoyed it.

Objective - this leaned towards basic in some spots, but the cadence was strong so I enjoyed it. more multis would have helped. that being said I liked the story, and you had some real poetic and poignant lines in there. such as the flower and the stem one.

overall, good battle guys. my vote is not doing it justice just pressed for time. just know I read them both twice and definitely liked them. in the end nigmas end rhymes bothered me a bit. objective had a verse that sounded better and had some real powerful lines in there. very close. but

vote - objective