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Aero · 01-29-2020, 10:56 AM

@Adverse

You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!"

Predictable as a hot summer? Lol that made zero sense then to follow it up with a silly set up wasn't too good. So work on cleaning that up.

But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived

The punch is actually not worded badly it's just way too many syllables. Should try to keep your punchlines to no more than 20 syllables this is 32... Buuuut if you're going to do more than 20 syllables for the punchline make sure the set up flows with multis

You're gangster? Dead the shit, I'm not the one you'll get credit with
I'll only say F, a G if they erect statues for the greatest cocksucker to ever live

01-29-2020, 10:56 AM	#24
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,826 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	@Adverse You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!" Predictable as a hot summer? Lol that made zero sense then to follow it up with a silly set up wasn't too good. So work on cleaning that up. But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived The punch is actually not worded badly it's just way too many syllables. Should try to keep your punchlines to no more than 20 syllables this is 32... Buuuut if you're going to do more than 20 syllables for the punchline make sure the set up flows with multis You're gangster? Dead the shit, I'm not the one you'll get credit with I'll only say F, a G if they erect statues for the greatest cocksucker to ever live __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.