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Adverse · 01-26-2020, 01:08 AM

I like the poetic tone of your pieces and though repetition works up to a point, i think you should reiterate only to a certain extent, we get it after the second time. It adds nothing to the piece it just seems like unnecessary filler, get a little more creative.

01-26-2020, 01:08 AM	#415
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	I like the poetic tone of your pieces and though repetition works up to a point, i think you should reiterate only to a certain extent, we get it after the second time. It adds nothing to the piece it just seems like unnecessary filler, get a little more creative.