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Old 01-14-2020, 09:09 PM   #1
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Hey bud, i don't see why nobody comments on your posts, you got a lot of potential. Ths only thing I'd say is to put a little more passion into your bars, you've got a good flow. Do you memorize your lyrics before spitting them or read them? Because it sounds like you're just reading them off a paper or something and you'd benefit from knowing them from top to bottom before you hop into it. Remember quality over quanity! But i like your sound and think you got a lot of potential.
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