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Old 01-08-2020, 04:51 PM   #377
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White doves flock together; majestically and mystically
The majesty of grace blesses the sky with faith
White doves flock together splendidly; together
They flock together in adventures forever
I love white doves; they flock together beautifully
White doves are amazing; flying in the sky
White doves flock together joyously; with splendor
They have embers to remember from december
White doves flock together with amazing faith
White doves flock together with splendid fate
White doves are splendor; with grace and rememberance
In december; white doves fly to Israel.
The repetition doesn’t really add much. Starting each line with ‘white doves’ doesn’t hurt the piece, but the repeating of words like ‘together’ does. Stop being a wack faggot.
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Ngl, I bit my whole style from DMS
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