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Old 06-13-2013, 11:33 AM   #10
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The others can see, the momentum builds and more ones start to believe, then one becomes three
With bravery they scream like banshees and banish the sea, it recedes and it flees
They gather around,they become bound to the one and so a new shepherd is crowned
A victory found, but how long will it be before that ideology is drowned?




this was definitely my favorite part although i think the whole thing was fire. your transitions were smooth and flow was on point. as far as content i enjoyed the whole 1 person can make a difference. the whole 1=3 those 3=9 and so on so forth idea reminded me of that movie pay it forward only yours was more on target with that "fight the power feel" also enjoyed the ocean/government metaphor. dope piece man, glad you linked me to it. stay up
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