It took some effort but not much for sure, now that you mention it I didn't really flesh out a concept at all, or go through the process of removing/fixing fillers etc. that I normally do/did. Thanks for the read and honest/helpful feedback, this is inspiring. Will hit up one of your pieces later on.
__________________
I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o
|