[Spoken]

Blacket my dear friend....


Love reading your writing because of the simple wording you so elegantly protrue with ease. One liners here and there had my thinking real deep but a piece as a whole was just a cultivating imagery. You sprinkled the details to paint a picture for me tk read and easily warch the scriptures in slow motion fade off to the next. Especially like the deep connection you implamented leaving it so relatable with anyone to read down the stanzas. Your diction on this was executed quite perfectly with the the scheme and your little hiccups in the rhyme actually patterned well and i caught on to it fast and proceeded from there. Great spoken word here my friend. The vocabulary which i am so used to be packed wjth was more subtle this time around but still stuck with great deliverance.