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Sinacog · 10-17-2019, 01:40 AM

Dead Man - Ascension

Hello, Blacketh.

I thought this was a good written; full of expanded intellect and heartstrokes with the pen' that brought me to black dark realms; and good sharp content. Your verbosity is good; your verbosity is good; your verbosity is really well done. I think you're a excellent writer where you're ground. I believe you should expand here; go to different areas; stay well put. Your black verses are well done; you could use more christian language. Vocabulary is your strong suit. Your vocabulary is very strong. Your verbosity is good; yet with more book reading. Could be concrete. That's what most writers nowadays need. Concrete easy to read writing. Concrete as a novel. Good work, Dead Man. Nice work on this piece.

10-17-2019, 01:40 AM	#6
Sinacog R.Killsbury 3000 Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,299 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129215	Dead Man - Ascension Hello, Blacketh. I thought this was a good written; full of expanded intellect and heartstrokes with the pen' that brought me to black dark realms; and good sharp content. Your verbosity is good; your verbosity is good; your verbosity is really well done. I think you're a excellent writer where you're ground. I believe you should expand here; go to different areas; stay well put. Your black verses are well done; you could use more christian language. Vocabulary is your strong suit. Your vocabulary is very strong. Your verbosity is good; yet with more book reading. Could be concrete. That's what most writers nowadays need. Concrete easy to read writing. Concrete as a novel. Good work, Dead Man. Nice work on this piece.