Not sure what you was doin' SPITZ, your dope & yeah this just wasn't...
Dragon's verse was aight, good to see you eased back somewhat on the repeatition of words..
less is more.
Not a bad read, NYC can def rip shit apart...just didn't do it here.
Sin I like your shit when you don't use the same words back to back to back...It takes away resonance from the reader imo, becomes bland & predictable...
This was better.
Stay up my friends...
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