[big baby]

don't know why this didn't get more distinction.


a lot of quotables. some times i think it may have gotten tacky but then the next line would just be another smooth transition, with another clever little attachment. the thing here was consistency which is a huge flaw in a lot of writing. you'll see 2-3 good lines then the rest just stumble in, taking away from the luster of the first few. but this was pretty good throughout. i liked the correlation of slang/euphemisms constantly, and being used with words that fit the scheme -(thats the crux of what you did) the flex piece was very cool. some ones made me chuckle, and you actually got a few thoughts across - religion, and the tel aviv reference. antivax gas dentist put together was cool. you can see the flow of your thoughts and the knowledge of things going on in the world to connect it better. really good put together