I thought blue bayous ability to edit apostrophes and certain obvious grammatical errors was a homage to his lack of hands. What's a little mark above certain letters when you can barely execute a 10 inch wide toe drag? Lol pretty comical but I thought the story was pretty cool. Had some depth to it nawme saying? Cool wording too and nice concepts.
Pharoah that shit was a cool lil piece just a bit stretched at times and boring. Was there any layering to the characters? Any off the cuff imagery? Upper level metaphors? I did enjoy it for what is was
Mvgt/ blue bayou
__________________
UNIFIED THEORY
|