Diablo -
interesting read, good lucks on the structure and imminent rhyme scheme - good work on the flow and vocal points of the story's portrayal. Very interesting work on this piece. Nice job.
MR. J -
Decent work on this piece - very good work on the details and structure; good work on the details of the piece and rhyme scheme. Good work on this piece, MR. J. Good work.
V/ Diablo..
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