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Old 07-25-2019, 11:15 PM   #9
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Dope battle. I thought literary wise in a Shakespearean sense, Lars dominated. The Japanese wording was a nice touch. I like the way you Storytell with a balance of edge and flow.

Mr. J came with that nyc sort of hood bop that i fuck with. I liked the ending to yours a little more than Lars it was a nice lol mind bender. I was flowing to it sort of at a wu tang rhythm.

Close battle I think both fell off in Parts Lars unnecessarily used obscure words where more laconic verbiage would have sufficed and j lost his bop a few times. At the end of the day it's preference and I liked mrj a little more this time. Good battle

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