[Adonis]

Longer Version in Mag

So...Two rahter opposite verses if I may say so. OB had a more tedious read, very layered and heavy, or rather primarily focused on rhyme scheme. Meanwhile Witty went straight story with less of an impressive case in the structure department, but IMO far superior in story telling and actual flow of both story and rhyme pattern. Nothing really weighed his verse down, while OB in my eyes had such a heavy rhyme structure that in the end it sort of disrupted the content and king of diluted the main arc of the story itself.


v/ Witty - fast paced story and easily accesable rhyme scheme over long drawn out one with heavy scheme