I enjoyed this shit as well. A lot of emotion as mentioned by others, great penmanship throughout.
kurt, latore, shakur, shuffling through on the browser
normalcy's paused. quiet as space. jupiters powder
^Your way with words in general in this piece is just dope af. Takes you from one thing right to an abstract similie in 5 words explaining the atmosphere of it all.
The build up to such an execution is seen throughout as well in subtle ways like here:
every nuance i learned from human encounters
too many to count. too many to counsel
with obstacles accruing names like they're mountains
^Just good shit in general throughout.
Ending hits you in the guts too. Good shit.
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So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.
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