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Old 07-07-2019, 04:32 PM   #6
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Wow, just wow. *slow clap...with a soul clap* The little speck, president desperate dropped a descently clever flex with the golden girl reference rhyme scheme (quite slick). Then went a tad bit overboard with the granny porn journalistic lynquistics. His opener was not appealing but gave insight to the character of the opponent but lacked any real sting. Now in regarding to his vcloser I assume his was going to hammer the nail in the coffin with the "u’re serving pensioners the D, and blasting semen in geriatrics even" line (which really caught my attention), but then fell off like a pro skater getting wiped out on the concrete face first.
As for spree, dude came in hangry for beef. His opened up with a direct personal gut punch,*"U keep explaining why ur great "(which rings true based on the ego characteristic of the opponent). Furthermore, it was as though spree sat little man drop and gave him a scolding and a timeout (very directly explaining the history of his misery). Then he went in on the family tip (I understand it adds to the sting...but I dislike this type of angle**unnecessary**). Honesty, I thought the poop line was hilarious. Closer was OK but a closer none the less.
I going with spree for a more direct and harder hitting theme.
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