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Originally Posted by veritas
I’m deceased at the moment and momentarily for you thinking you were going to bury
Because these choppers rip you like two honey badgers just let out that Pet Cemetery
lol nah I cant really fuck with this
Haymakers on deck like Little Mac and pushing select on the controller, I drop Tyson
So what I do to a chump who is gassed-up and dick rode like the group Allen Knights in?
Hand to hand: I Muay Thai clench your neck then fracture your cervical and thoracic ladder
Mind to mind: I bend space and time and leave your brain warped until it’s no longer classed as matter
better suited to a live battle but this was still fire af to me
Atom smasher or trash compactor its all the same with the likes of you
You wouldn’t be sick swimming in pig shit while smoking on swine flu
this is played on multiple levels....firstly I don't even think swine flu exists any longer? ...but away from the played aspect...I don't think one can smoke the illness?
I transcend whatever you pen, I battle the very concept of battling, Allen.
I bring this art to the next level, you only contribute to its shallowing, Allen
v style definitely lends itself to a live battle format...flow and repetition here were fly and the content matter is elegantly emphasized by the fact that this is a next level approach to the mundane and tired text style that Allen and the majority of writers here continue to employ.
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Originally Posted by Chamber
faggot ur crib'll get lit...
w/ hollows from mercenaries, they'll scoop the evidence from a hit strong
uzi's droppin shells, got the crew pickin up cases like everyone 69 snitched on
this is fire
pussy u ain't makin it past rd1 w/ ya bars bitch, u'll get scared quick
ur spot in the tourney sucha End Game, it'll look like Tony Starks script
trash....that's not even what end game really even means regardless of the painfully predictable nature of this lame flip
get my gonnies to kidnap ya, this bastard is a punk
u aint no Keebler Elf but i'll put this faggot ass cracker ina trunk
Keebler elves bake cookies and even if they did bake crackers what would be so faggoty about them? I guess put this cracker in a trunk is still pretty dope conceptually but wording needs effort here.
one verse u ok next ur trash, man this fucks a clown
we all kno Variable shittin w/ the bars his shit is always goin up & down
horrendous wordplay
gotta hattori hanzo sharpened, 2 strikes wreckin ya ways
he'll be a faggot dressed for a funeral after i slash V-neck w/ the blade
played and piss poor wording ta boot
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I realllllllly wanna give this to v just because the verse was so much more enjoyable from an actual battling perspective and the fresh approach amidst a time when text is more stale than it has ever been but id be fronting if I slept on that 69 bar and cracker in a trunk had potential.
v allen
but it would be rejuvenating for this hobby to read more verse where people actually had their own style like V had here.... people more concerned with conforming to the norm to garner votes than to write with their own style has this hobby in critical condition. reading and voting on battles would be a lot more fun and rewarding if we weren't reading one style over and over and over...............