[Sharp]

I’m deceased at the moment and momentarily for you thinking you were going to bury
Because these choppers rip you like two honey badgers just let out that Pet Cemetery
honestly, V's one of like 3 people who could pull this off to me. It's funny enough, but having heard his voice, it fits
Haymakers on deck like Little Mac and pushing select on the controller, I drop Tyson
So what I do to a chump who is gassed-up and dick rode like the group Allen Knights in?
Hand to hand: I Muay Thai clench your neck then fracture your cervical and thoracic ladder
Mind to mind: I bend space and time and leave your brain warped until it’s no longer classed as matter
I'm thinking these 4 all work together because the first two read like they're leading into something. If I'm wrong, those first two are a little lacking in harshness. If I'm right, I like the hand to hand/mind to mind concept in execution. The gamble with something like this though is its flashy, but it's less space for the punchlines that are made more effective by this
Atom smasher or trash compactor its all the same with the likes of you
You wouldn’t be sick swimming in pig shit while smoking on swine flu
this is just too corny to me. I know v can pull off humor but I've seen enough 'sick' concepts in songs, battles, whatever, that really minimize the humor to me
I transcend whatever you pen, I battle the very concept of battling, Allen.
I bring this art to the next level, you only contribute to its shallowing, Allen
I understand how this bar is half bar for Allen with a nice concept and half trap for voters - if you don't like it, you're probably also contributing to its shallowing - and don't know if it comes off hugely for me because there's some mechanical issues. 'battling, Allen' /'shallowing, Allen' only really rhymes in the sense that it's the exact syllables. I think if word before Allen fully rhymes, this bar has a lot more impact

I wanna see more from veritas in general. Fact is, he avoids copying the guys who do it well, but there's a reason peopleime Allen get copied so much in the first place


Faggot ur crib'll get lit...
w/ hollows from mercenaries, they'll scoop the evidence from a hit strong
uzi's droppin shells, got the crew pickin up cases like everyone 69 snitched on
solid
pussy u ain't makin it past rd1 w/ ya bars bitch, u'll get scared quick
ur spot in the tourney sucha End Game, it'll look like Tony Starks script
'spot in the tourney sucha End Game' is mad awkward to me so it's too obvious where ths bar is going for it to really land
get my gonnies to kidnap ya, this bastard is a punk
u aint no Keebler Elf but i'll put this faggot ass cracker ina trunk
light, but still funny
one verse u ok next ur trash, man this fucks a clown
we all kno Variable shittin w/ the bars his shit is always goin up & down
little too awkward to really hit for me
gotta hattori hanzo sharpened, 2 strikes wreckin ya ways
he'll be a faggot dressed for a funeral after i slash V-neck w/ the blade
this is okay


This was actually a fun read. Good to see an Allen Knight verse again, and I think Veritas really took on his opponent his own way. I'm a fan of meta and very real punches, but his verse did get weighed down by some corny parts and clunky wording at times. Allen didn't really go too hard here, his opener being his best line followed by some inconsistent punches. He didn't really capitalize on the 4 vs 5 punches here but because some of those were too weak, but V's best part to me was line 3-6, which was great conceptually, had all the makings of giving his verse an arc, but was followed up by a 'sick' flip that really put the brakes on that momentum for me.

Enjoyed the read guys

V/Allen