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I’m deceased at the moment and momentarily for you thinking you were going to bury
Because these choppers rip you like two honey badgers just let out that Pet Cemetery

would like to see the incorporation of multis somewhere. the bar has an aggressive feel to it, but it's more of a metaphor to be taken at face value, would prefer to see some kind of double entendre

Haymakers on deck like Little Mac and pushing select on the controller, I drop Tyson
So what I do to a chump who is gassed-up and dick rode like the group Allen Knights in?

technically a multi, but could be expanded more. You're kind asking what you're supposed to do, which doesn't feel like it's as aggressive as just telling us what you're going to do. Also would like a double entendre

Hand to hand: I Muay Thai clench your neck then fracture your cervical and thoracic ladder
Mind to mind: I bend space and time and leave your brain warped until it’s no longer classed as matter

this bar just feels too abstract and weird to me. You could probably do something more with it, such as the double meaning in "matter" which isn't super original or fresh, but at least it'd be something

Atom smasher or trash compactor its all the same with the likes of you
You wouldn’t be sick swimming in pig shit while smoking on swine flu

this bar is a little gross to me, but out of all of your bars I think it's the one that best reflects the direction I'd like to see you move in. There's a double interpretation and the usual "set-up" followed by a "punchline" format. Only really issue with it is the "sick" wordplay was incredibly outdated by like 2003. Still, this is your best bar and you should build off this approach imo

I transcend whatever you pen, I battle the very concept of battling, Allen.
I bring this art to the next level, you only contribute to its shallowing, Allen

the "battle the very concept of battling" made me lol a bit, especially given your therapist gimmick. I'm okay with having humorous set-up lines, so I could probably get down with that. The closing punch just needed more.

faggot ur crib'll get lit...
w/ hollows from mercenaries, they'll scoop the evidence from a hit strong
uzi's droppin shells, got the crew pickin up cases like everyone 69 snitched on

cool opener, i like the reference. Just the image of people walking around and picking up cases after shooting seems a bit farfetched to me

pussy u ain't makin it past rd1 w/ ya bars bitch, u'll get scared quick
ur spot in the tourney sucha End Game, it'll look like Tony Starks script

a bit simple and I havent been watching as many live battles as I used to but i feel like avenger/comic book bars have to be kinda played out

get my gonnies to kidnap ya, this bastard is a punk
u aint no Keebler Elf but i'll put this faggot ass cracker ina trunk

I liked this more than most people probably did. I thought it was creative

one verse u ok next ur trash, man this fucks a clown
we all kno Variable shittin w/ the bars his shit is always goin up & down

saying shit twice is a bit redundant. the wp had potential but i wasnt really feeling the execution

gotta hattori hanzo sharpened, 2 strikes wreckin ya ways
he'll be a faggot dressed for a funeral after i slash V-neck w/ the blade

ok closer

I've seen AK drop better, but it was still a solid showing. I don't think this match was remotely close enough to be debatable, though. He was the only one who really demonstrated having a grasp on executing punchlines, executing multis, his flow was a bit smoother, and his wording was more efficient. Overall, he takes all cats hands down

v/ Chamber