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Old 05-18-2019, 02:11 AM   #3
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That introduction was cold as ice my dude, happy to see you still writing
I have always enjoyed reading your work, this was smoothly written
that lunar lullaby section was one of my favorite things to see weaved together
I would be robbing the piece if I tried pulling any other quotes out of it
pretty amazing piece though, deserves more love
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