[Objective]

Dead Man: Dope drop as usual. Enjoyed the read from start to finnish. Rhymescheme was on point, the flow was also easy to follow yet intricate enough to be interesting as a stand-alone thing apart from the topic, your descriptions was tight. The content matter was cool and onpoint with a fluent enough storytelling but I'd like some reference to why he was using the gasmask tho', but that's nitpicking. Solid showing.

Patrown: Short verse. Still dope and on-topic. Enjoyed the fact that you used the gasmask in it. I can tell the writing is really great but I would have enjoyed it been better if it was longer. Content matter was dope af and everything was on point.

Vote: Patrowns verse is really great, but seeing how DM managed to stay consistent for a much longer time and had some really dope lines in there as well he's getting my vote without thinking twice. However, I did read through both verses twice and came to the same conclusion; Dead Man gets my vote.