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Originally Posted by Dystopian
First up, text battling this nerd is fucked!
Just tryin to hide his f@ggotry, and not behind the word Knuck.
decent recent event concept, nerd's fucked would have flown smoother than nerd is fucked to match with 'word knuck' and 'herb sucks'
Herb sucks, Aint worth a mention, hes a poofter no question..
Aer bed a chick? They’d bounce in a second.
airbed/bounce good connection/flip... seen basically all the 'aer/air' flips there are on him over the years but this was flipped well
Thinks hes dope but far from it, so full of shit..
If hes ever been swagger jacked, in front of a mirror whilst pullin dick.
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didn't dig this one so much
Aero.. you were never Mr. Squeaky Clean! Check the hindsight!
If your style was ever spotless, its coz you’ve never seen the limelight.
decent
Yur just a gene-pool contaminant, ya whole conceptions a fateful accident,
With luck you’ll post a sewer side-note, without referencing waste management.
that's an old wp unfortunately, been done to death.... you'll know what has/hasn't been done once you've been around a while
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Got potential - concepts are good - work on setting them up in the first line instead of just rhyming something, and try rhyming a couple or a few words, it makes the punch come off stronger when you've got a good rhythm.
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Originally Posted by Aero
Your mom? Whoo, I feed her pills & let others have at her nookie
after she takes some mollies she let's a group of them savage her pussy
I had to look up both meanings of molly lmao. Obv it lost sting from that but it would have been cool otherwise
then her and I go bouts, it was in the third I gave her the penile
tried to give detour that round worse than Diz did when he freestyled
seen the d to her wp before, flipped with current event was cool
But let's talk about you, & how I knew you had no chance for the win
I told him make every word count, he asked what's the max and the min
cool wp... could've used a 'he's a nerd' set up or something
Homosexuality weakens our moral fiber, I just mention the facts
I think of what's wrong in society and Dystopian is the definition of that
decent
So no homo but my dick hangs nine inches I got what girls truly love
Heard you barely hangover three &'re more disappointing than the movie was
LoL cool
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Not your best verse concept wise but the classic Aero swag was there. Still enjoyed.
Was kind of close on concepts, but I've got Aer taking this with a better/more polished delivery.
V/ Aero