[Adonis]

Dead - So this verse was pretty deep. There was a ton of detail in the writing, a bunch of shit I can just Google and enjoy, basically a verse jam packed with ideas. The flow was dope, I can't remember a single time in either read where I had to back track, or even thought it wasn't good enough to quote. But...the downside of the entire verse was it's abruptness. Although it's a bit of catch 22 here, because if it kept going it would have been long and drawn out, yet it ended too quick. I guess I would have preferred there to be more of meaning behind it all, why is he bombing US, when something to explain a bit more. I know you touched on these a bit, but not enough in my mind. All in all though I'm nit picking, I thought this was a dope verse, and you hit the topic with top notch flow and still did this while incorporating many ideas into the verse/image you painted. Good shit.

Pat - "Where's the BEEF?!" Very old commercial, before mine, and probably all of our time. So, this verse was good for what it was. A short, to the point, rather visual for only having like half the line requirement or so it seems, but honestly it was written well.


Vote - Dead

This was not very close in my eyes, but it is "what could have been". I think Patrown had a nice direction, but didn't have the time. I hope you finish that verse, because that's the beginning of something rather dope.