Knock ur noggin into ya gut. Admitting u're top tier, it hurts ta think it..
Hell, I couldn't even stomach da thought- While u're doin a full fledge Krang impersonation
i had to look this up, thought this was dope
Look. I'ma bout this money &'ll put in work on u for about a dime
Hold down my shift while pressin f'in Jabari'll see I'm makin dem $$$$$$$ signs
nahhh
Playing gun-ho on da net'll leave ya real life crippled & bleedin often
Keep doin all dat computer talk from ur chair nerd & end up just like Steven Hawkins
pretty played angle and you lose points cause it’s Stephen hawking and not Hawkins, coulda been dope but it’s a decent line as is
Cuz I pack a gauge, fam that'll splat ya brains. BLAM!
Raisin this huge stick in da air at u has me lookin da hero. Captain Caveman
alright
& I'm Toni from Girlfriends when bein disrespectful w. this big weapon
^ Meaning: I'ma have Jabari's name incorrect after Iettin off da cannon in his midsection
nah pretty wordy, not sure what you were going for
Trust da pump'll give ur body a workout. When I attack it hurts, b...
Target ur core until ya pop up & drop to da ground my guy.. Thas a burpee
ok here
He'll not b spared. In fact, think Mortal Kombat when I flare da gat:
Pairin claps Finish Him w. bullets w. his name on it. They'll whistle through da Erron Black
nice
If the machine spit out my paper, I'll have u & stick clique easily laid out
When someone says da secret word, everybody screams on some Pee-Wee's Playhouse
nah
2 nice
2 ok
1 Decent
3 misses
Vs
This rifle tucked in the pants like a dress shirt - so let ya men rush/
Soon as they see the arm, they get folded under the blazer like a French cuff/
cool opener
You the clown type! My crew’ll be camped outside ya crib lettin rounds fly/
Shootin off the tripods...it wave from the stands like the crowd hype/
bit of a played angle and the flip wasn’t anything outrageous. Decent
You denied Dregs’ extension for ya last win...You think that slick shit fine?/
Well i got a beam and a ladder on a big 9...the Inf gon’ have the extension this time/
wassnt feelin this one
My shooters made a career of killing. For a couple Gs they’ll have the thing sparkin/
Ex-military cats...I’ll have patriots dumpin the barrel in ya waves like the Boston Tea Party/
lmao yooo this is fire af
Chest shot! I’ll have his heart rate skippin when this 9 go hit em/
The way it clap make the beat sound wrong...it got white boy rhythm/
lol alright
It was ‘No Smoke’....but he was ‘Alarmed’ when he opened his front door and I appeared/
I ‘enter calm’ wit it ringing- lighting queers. Even line up the kids in the building like a fire drill/
oh nah man this one was way too wordy
The 30 hanging outta the 9...see what this extendo bout/
It bend back- and put him under the pole...his life in limbo now/
its decent, the concept is a bit of a stretch and to make it really work I feel like it needed a bit more
That first shot leave ya smokin, bro. I’ll finish the job when I approach you, hoe/
Then stand over ya wit the fourty-four...n let the nose extend while he lyin like Pinocchio/
pretty played concept here, wasn’t feelin
2 nice
1 ok
2 Decent
3 misses
Good battle here and props for going the full 16 with good quality bars. Suth had a few weird concepts in this one but also a few unexpected nice concepts as well, which made for some nice hits. Jabari had LOTB with the Boston tea party bar but I feel he also had some filler joints that didn’t have too much impact for me such as the Inf bar, and the Pinocchio line. The fire drill bar definitely had potential cause I had one in the words too but could never figure out how to execute it. I feel like that’s what happened here, considering it was your wordiest bar. Close battle that can go either way but I have suth edging it.
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