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Old 05-04-2019, 04:41 PM   #9
Jabari Black
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i'll murda ya fam...
& get'em disposed of, sprayin till theres only cannon smoke
this ain't a Estuary but im leavin bodies wet dumped on random coasts

(This was light to me. Leaving bodies wet was okay but the body/body of waters been done - not too much but the rest of the punch was going to have to be nice for this to land heavy imo. Leaving bodies wet, dumped on random coasts doesn’t tie into the estuary extremely well - it works but it’s a loose association)

u want beef.. i'll get drunk & drive into ya crew jus hittin faggots
its the art of war & the whip hittin ya team like egpytian hieroglyphic tablets

(Lol my boy Allen pregaming for a hit and run. This was cool. Art of war portion of the punch was good and carried the punch. I didn’t care for the whip hitting ya team tie in just cus imthat coulda applied to anything slave related and I could be trippin but that’s not the first hieroglyphic I think of. Anyway, overall, this is pretty good)

ur to pussy to go out wen ur in beef, ima sniper that'll wait till the next day
Dexa Scan the area & still catch a beam till u can see thru his face like a X-ray

(This is fire. Dexa Scan flip was smooth and the see through his face like a x Ray a grimey and seamless way to end the punch)

u drop the same played af bars, concepts aint gotten all hype
ur wordplays Dragon Bleu & there more beat than cm punks last octagon fight

(Some of this going over my head but the part I do understand I didn’t care too much for. I’m assuming Dragon Bleu the nickname for whoever cm punk just battled? If not idk what that association is. Other than that, the draggin/dragon flip been done and ain’t that special to me, and saying his wordplay “dragging” and “beat” a lil weird to me)

u stay w/ the weak athlete concepts, a crutch u been gainin
got enough sports teams down ur neck that shit could host spring training

(Good angle hear, but the punch was light - this is okay at best)



you’ll die for those flips. the way i’m leavin you in shambles is brutal
Pad Thai material all you want...i got Two Sticks in hand that’ll scramble your Noodle

(It feel slightly unfair to critique this because I don’t get the pad Thai flip but i will ant way. I like the personal angle. Didnt care for the two sticks/noodle flip though - it’s essentially the same thing as be chop stick/noodle flip)

called me out on RB & got BODIED. why challenge a guy that always rips you queer?!
guess it makes sense you’d come after me...you have on every all-time list for yearsss

(Good personal. The flip is nice. Nice bar)

John dying was sad man. he taught us quick lessons with tales..
but don't fret, you’ll see a Singleton errytime your bitch steps on a scale

(Lmao fam this so damn outlandish. I ain’t care for this. He seeing a ton on a scale throwing me off lol - that’s a lot of weight. “A single ton” not really a phrase someone would use (they just say a on) and the single ton flip works but it ain’t perfect (the ton night stressed))

Al’s just a washed up pussy with a wack style whose talent’s been abandoned
can’t hang wit this New Era/Field. & that’s the only place we’ll see Allen w/ a Cannon

(Good line. Only critique is I think you prob coulda had a tie in to him not shooting or something bout gun bars or whatever. Good line though)

at ur porch for the guap mayne, cock bang soon as the glock’s aimed
Pole Out – i’ll have ‘Metal flyin thru ya Front Door’ like a Swat Raid

(Yep - nice closer. I like the flow. I’d avoid using cock bang in the future. Metal flying/swat raid an nice flip. Nice line)


I got blue taking this one. Solid verse from both even though I think this isn’t the best work from Allen. The wording was there as always but he just didn’t have the clever wordplay and the haymakers he normally has.

Blue was blue here. Blue wording make it where he rarely misses a punch. He had the more consistent verse here and he had some heavy punches here. The all time list personal was dope and you came with some good angles.

Overall pretty good battle but I got Blue taking it.

Mvgt Blue
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