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Old 06-11-2013, 05:31 PM   #3
Rawn M.D.
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Yo I really enjoyed this...

i dont think that was supposed to be rhyme driven as much as conceptual...and it suceeded in that imo...

the simple complexity was dope af...the use of homnymns n juxtapositions to bring out the answer, plus the tenses of words..sht was dope...imo

real concise, yet hit broadstrokes...i would quote stuff but im on a tablet, so shts like impossible...but i thinnk u'd know what i'd quote by what im sayn'...

this also reminded me of something, im not sure what, and im not saying its unoriginal, just the twist to it...something I may have read in a philosophy or world religions class...i unno.. but deff had a very original and unique twist...

dope sht man. We gotta collab =/
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