[josh s]

Originally Posted by Adonis

I’ve heard of long hair don't care, but this guy really let lose; a fuckin goatee full of pubes
You're extra noob a "vet confused", but I admitt your flex is butter - Harvey Milk - After the Flu
not a bad line took a second to catch, funny, couple gay puns, i c u what u did there
I've seen your rise and your fall, only, its mostly the ladder
Which is ironic cuzzo, the only rung you reached is under my soles when I battle
nice 1, i think that's gonna go over domes like u on top of that ladder
I'm saying... Come on vader, why'd you have to go and remove the Mask?
Now, Boy! Meet World. His name Adonis, yours? It's just lost in the past
this seems pretty straight forward, not seeing any clever concept here, if i missed something feel free to lmk
This a flash in the pan, and Inno punch drunk but he's nimble
I'd roast you On-Line but your moms, she probly try and eat you for dinner
lite punch
For reall though, we're cool, I just gotta be fed
I know you're Mid-West, me, California Kid. I eat toast, you, eat this toaster, in-bred
decent scheme, worded cool, punch was ok

BANG!!
pow!

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Originally Posted by Innovator

Listen I’m throat punching that fat bitch you call a wife with my dick
She serves me like a bartender, funny cuz she only works for the tip.
i've seen similar flips but this was ok
If I said I came in her mouth, that’s a polite retelling of the whore
She’s got me deep in her web so when Internet I do more than explore
decent scheme, wording was missing something, i like how u ended the line with i do more than explore.. that made me laugh
I’ll pull triggers this pussy won’t last till dinner when I clap back
Fuck this nigger, in this battle I’m pushing hard for the ER, that’s a Cash back
i don't get why that's a Cash back. feel free to explain
Let the pound ring, that bitch don’t have no missed calls
So when I touch you, there won’t be any hands to catch your fall
ok..
Always come up short, you give her 6 and she gets mad n throws fits
We don’t size up, I give her 12 cuz she says the shoe always fits
this sounded funny as hell

Over all: this was an interesting match up. adonis had a couple good concepts that maybe didn't the hardest but i still found them to be creative. (work on better wordplay and stronger punches, the wording on your closer was well done just old flips) Inno also had a couple good schemes. Innovator, ur punch lines were ok, i think a couple of them just didn't have the most attention to wording. i think both verses were creative, altho inno had a couple more dated concepts. all in all, there was a line from each battler that didn't make sense to me but for the most part i was able to catch the wordplays. good battle guys. i got a tie but as a tie breaker to keep things moving im gonna vote for the guy who i thought had the harder punchlines.

v/ Innovator

innos best bar was his closer and adonis best line was the ladder/rung line (good wording, solid execution)