No robbery brewing. Ain’t got the influence. Dog this a shoe-in
Opps catch u moving; leave u witha Vacant Look. That’s not a Property Viewing
-This is ok.
Stick Cliques sloppy cousin. Bad wording, choppy trouble
Boyyy you just Arya Stark naked... What's that?! A Body double
-Ok
Even your hoe's heard of me. GOAT status. Show courtesy
Mask on — no burglary. Orc walking with two sticks that's Post Surgery
-Cool swag, not much impact.
Been working from home. Stock are easy. Guap on repeat
Your idea of Remote Access is asking your Moms if you can watch the TV
-Cool
My sex life gets hype. The way I moves inspiring
If YOUR girl leaves u Steamy Notes.. it's “do NOT forget to do the Ironing”
-Cool
Salute kid. Carbine gota smooth grip & shoot quick when days darken
Got a few clips to get dude hit but on average it's a .30, that's James Harden
-Ok
We KNOW — you the Glock holder. The GOD Hova. The blocks Yoda.
Pfft ya style ain't just Basic bitch, it drinks spiced Lattes && does Hot Yoga
-Ok
Overall, the wording in this verse was so good. Concepts were ok, nothing crazy. Didn’t really come at his throat.
The 9 extend.. A '50' clip in the chamber - thats enough to hit 'Many Men'
I let off ten! Bullets hit u first - then lift ya son across the buildin like La Quinta Inn
-The son/sun thing is obviously super old and the flip wasn’t enough to carry it.
Pray! Small shotgun - The cap double size out the head when it sprays
U see the barrel kick.. It look like im holdin 'Toad' from Super Mario sideways
-Pretty obscure...trying to picture it but not really getting it.
I dont stunt! This like rolling up a .2 inside a Swisher.. Im bout to get way to blunt
Bullets hit everything in ya spot - even the baby get rocked like Westbrook taunt
-Cool
The metal rise ya! Red beam give me directions...it start to analyze ya
Catch you travelin - Give u tha Bird with the double scope..Thats the TripAdvisor
-Dope
U got a badge for being a Vet! I show my badge when these 2 K's assist
I get the 'Greenlight' - My aim Gold from the side angle.. Im a Corner Specialist
-I don’t play 2K sonthis was lost on me. I can get the idea but doesn’t hit for me personally.
Eject the round where ya disc b! Tell Cred that Jesus talk was riskey
Make a GunBar Boy pay for his words.. Diff Shots! Im bout to give this Irish Whiskey
-Ok
Behind ya windows i bust the tint - Arm extend..thought it was memory muscle sense
The product i pack Theracal.. bullets hit - U'll be enhancing the wrong supplements
-Not feeling this.
So, I have Orc here. His verse didn’t have a ton of aggressiveness but it was concise and to the point and worded very well. Dubs prolly had LOtB with TripAdvisor but he had more misses. His concepts are always kind of all over the place to me. He seems to have a lot of attempts at connections throughout the concept, which is cool, but sometimes it becomes too much and they don’t always enhance the bar. I also would like to see him have more multi’s in his verses. When you have longer lines you have to try to increase the amount of syllables your rhyming to make it flow better. Just my 2 cents. Props to both.
Vote-Orc
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