Body - I quite like the concept as a swag bar. the set-up of "i'll leave you with bonus features", while well tying into the concept, isnt all that threatening and as constructed this would be a dope line in a gun bar swag & flow verse...while that just may be my opinion, the punch of you literally just having such a big gun it takes you both hands to use is light and not super effective...for me personally & the way i enjoy bars, you take a big risk using a s&f style gunbar in a 1-2 punch and while i like the meta, not sure if it will be effective enough here
Dregs - part/lock is lazy in the wording, but thats a bit nitpicky bcuz fuck me do i think this concept is creative & dope...love the nightmare on elm street series & ive never seen a 'pick up sticks' concept like this before so its very fresh to me...well constructed w/ the 5/6 part & damn the 3'4 tie in saying he'll "shrink up" and cower in fear while running home is dope to me
Cool battle fella's..quite the contrast of styles here so could see this going back and forth....i liked Dregs concept better & think the punch is stronger as well so he got this one imo...props to both
Vote- Dregs
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