Nice battle.
Flow- i like the concept, worded well. All the tie ins tied in. King fisher is played on King, but urs was a bit different w the fissure wp. Plus the context of the concept made it relevant, and it worked. Difficult bar to pull off as well as u did here.
King- urs was a bit wordy. Setup was ok. Wp was a lil forced imo. Overlookable tho. Nice bar overall
Vote flow.
Had more about his bar that i liked, whereas i had a few issues w Kings
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