Ay dope battle fellas.
Inc set up was aight - very light but works for a set up. The fact that it didn’t relate to the punch ain’t a big deal to me because the set up was a punch itself (although a light one). Second line was TOUGH though. You got “machine spray”, “soaking wet” and “air you out”. Probably would be light if you just flipped one, but putting it all together - it’s pretty dope. Good line.
Bleak brought it too. Home or business is a good tie in (them niggas relentless lol). The jehovah witness flip was nice and ‘racket to your front door’ was a nice tie in. The concept made smile lol. Only critique is the knocking at the door concept has been done a lot. Haven’t seen the Jehovah witness flip though personally.
Overall, I really enjoyed this battle. Both bars were heavy. I got Inc edging this one though. His bar had more complexity to me because he was flipping a longer phrase.
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