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Real Spit · 04-10-2019, 12:41 AM

Didn't care for the smelling salts line. There's no real misdirection to sell it because the set up was weak to me, and it's not a creative concept IMO. Wording is good as usual

Joog I thought yours was creative as fuck and hit hard the way you laid it out.

v/Joog

04-10-2019, 12:41 AM	#8
Real Spit Member Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 84 Rep Power: 608133	Didn't care for the smelling salts line. There's no real misdirection to sell it because the set up was weak to me, and it's not a creative concept IMO. Wording is good as usual Joog I thought yours was creative as fuck and hit hard the way you laid it out. v/Joog Last edited by Real Spit; 04-10-2019 at 01:21 AM.