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Originally Posted by Wise Wiggles
Hung. On. Girly. Im the one who wasnt worthy
Guess i gotta just trust the journey even tho im fucking hurting
Like all my love is burning
Rapid oozing. flamesss, then ash accumulates
Upon a vastly moonlit lake, how that passion pudding taste?
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Touch is way soft cuts thru chaos
The so surreal dopamine launch, love that takes off
[Insert intelligent quote]
Welcome to where skeletons float
Hell is a joke.
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really dug these two parts
overall enjoyed the piece, having trouble remembering everyone's body of works beyond their style/ writers voice. can see how your writing has matured. I would say the tone throughout is consistent and rich, it lets you stream of conscious more than most people while staying cohesive. very multi-faceted but still pointed
cool shit, keep writing