This is tough. Res wordplay was dope but the tie in was kind of redundant you shoot the macule as in shooting his eye, but shooting the mac is the wordplay to say if you shoot it I’ll go through his eye?
Plot was cool but I don’t see how the second half was really landing the punch? Seemed like a lazy way to use Pryor. Could have been built up to be a better line.
Got res in a close one
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