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Old 04-07-2019, 03:59 PM   #5
Mr. J
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Pretty well done Buddha, nice to see you return to form
it really picked up after the whole Scar & Mufasa bit
really dope theme and very deep. I like the rhyme scheme
very dope work all around

Sparsely spread it everywhere, so the bloodstream
Has a cathartic dose to soften a hardened heart bleed.
Pardon me, for partly bombarding you with the artistry.
I wholeheartedly apologize for bringing light to forgotten things,
Deep subconscious themes


dope stuff here.
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