This is another one that's coming down to my preference in execution. Both had nice tie ins with the setup. forine is slick but the flip doesn't work both ways as well as the Sanford and son bar. Hell of a reference to make, tbh I don't think everyone is gonna get it. Still, good wordplay, but 'I carry a big gun' is almost a caricature of itself here tbh. Still, the way the wp worked edges it out for me
V/snit
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