ryno: pretty dope tbh liked the wp, personal & execution
dom: the concept is ok & the connection is good but the initial punch calling ur switchblade catchy just seems forced unless its slang ive never heard of?
v/ ryno, edged it imo
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YOu"RE NOT MY MOM; I don't torture my mom; I TORTURE YOU//
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