Y’all gassed this artifact but I brought a colossal tool,
& after these shots ‘rock his body’...they’ll be coal miners digging for fossil fuel
good concept. maybe needed more w/ coal miner tie in, decent start..
I mean honestly...did y’all notice that Res is tenser?
Cuz he knows I’ma put a ‘handful of rounds down his throat’ like a pez dispenser
round candies....eh and the bar was stale to me
Class is in session...let me explain how history goes,
U’ll get the ‘long nose’ or I can put the ‘deuces in the air’...Nixon’s victory pose
Pretty good...more like this
Mystery close. All I do is clap guys. U’ll say I rap lies,
But if I go ‘overboard w/ gun bars’...then U should be worried about the capsize
Capsize has been done, flipped cool tho. And execution of the bar was better here to
So much water...he got baptize. Now I’m coastin thru,
Nozzle in hand…& after I wet up his home...he’ll be able sell it w/a ocean view
I see all the ocean view but this needed revision. or the concepts just wack, idk
I collect skeletons while skin is scorching on the bone,
So when I say I gotta ‘Mic hangin in my closet’...I’m not recording in my home
MIC plays need to be real creative or witty to hit....this a no. I even passed on using them.
U been workin at this for a grip & got hired to be shot,
But if this ‘promotions’ for his gun...then u know mine will get ‘fired on the spot’
The promotion/fired on the spot worked well enough...think the wording was okish
Ur hoe’s a magic trick. She on the wood...log sports,
My nigga she let me ‘run thru the walls’ like trying to board a train to Hogwarts
Ok. Harry Potter....cool.
How can I be stump? U’ll see me dump for free punk,
If u try & branch out...my bullets will ‘ring inside u’ like the interior of a tree trunk
seen many ring/tree concepts.....this a Eh/Ok to me
This icon will fadeaway...there’s no reversal compared,
Cuz if anybody ‘wanna be like Mike’...it was the year the commercial was aired
This closer not so much
fire off in ya buildin: the 5 alarm ya crew.
propellin: see wat tha choppa do..
Get sprayed: ima binaca u.. banana clip: crescent moon to ur gut make u do a kamala move.
had to look up but it's cool....flow was cool too on the execution
Now shut the helll up, cunttt.. you won’t be able to rally nerd..
-like, -like, -like.. are those concepts or are we listenin to a fuckn valley girl.
Personal hit hard, not much to say
Left u in an alley, curled.. it’s endin with screams when i send u the beams.
bump stock.. when i put two in this Snatch it aint a pregnancy screen.
Alright NP
You flip Rum Nitty lines.. bitch what u coppin aint tight..
when u stop in & write, 5 second rule: we already got the drop on that bite.
flipped well. the personal angle was cool too.
U dont carry the weight just be honest bitch, but i promise this..
Body will lose lil by lil.. so consider each line here as a fuckn progress pic.
I liked this...
& we can go hand to hand before I mass shoot ur core..
a swift hook’ll leave u with such a spinning globe u can be classroom decor.
Eh, different but not much here imo
I’m too old for this shit but i can still tell that ur a weaker opponent..
headshot left ur mind blank: now u can relate with that senior moment.
too simple for me, needed more
mann u aint grippin.. gun talk is ur clutch & it’s apparent kid..
so when you draww.. all that shit’s doing is gettin hung up on ur parent’s fridge.
This ok. went for humor its aightt
Break every damn bone in ur set.. u wish u were feelin numb now..
push em down the stairs.. now Body lookin like he’s mirrored at a funhouse.
Dope imagery....As a bar not too hard hitting..
Tha squad comin to eatt, faggot.. just sum drastic brutes who aint afraid to shoot..
see us centerpieces at ya table.. then give ur whole family the fuckin plastic fruit.
I had a centerpieces line...good hit though w/ plastic fruit
OVERALL solid battle. Different approaches & battler styles here. creative concepts vs similie punch after punch....i have to be honest similar to the JB battle Body had good hits & some misses.. such like the Mic plays. I can see how this can be close bc Body went for the throat more & Resin seemed to sacrifice directness for a creative flip. this is where opinions will differ.... I like punching when they all dope but in this case the concepts of resins won me over even tho some were light.. his misses werent as bad to me. Body had the Nixon line, opener & Hogwarts. Resin had Valley girl, closer, lil by lil.. trailed off near the end but closed strong
VOTE - RESIN
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