^ Alliteratin ur name… who the fuck u tryna impress guy?
Should be concerned w/ alliteratin ur verses, i.e. throwaway garbage in 9 outta 10 lines
Good wordplay, wording is a bit off for you..
I seen a litter w/p by spit right before i read it the first time, this was cool tho
Pho ain’t pronounced that way OR a herb, u been going from garbage to worse
Shoulda gave up on that culinary bar & tried cullin erry bar in your verse
cull... creative but not a word most people use ha, it still hit tho w/ the personal..
Res KILLED you in that. Those tortured wordplays were holdin u back lame
Way an Asian steppe all over you had me thinking Mongolian landscapes
This hit
I got a black whatsit that’s iron, chrome thingys that are nickel & steel
& Blue doohickeys too… on his boyfriend’s neck while he giggles & squeals
Lol a bit corny but worked
Listen. You DON’T wanna test me. Lead’ll chew through any dude who gets gassed
& your number’s UP if the 9 gets a round off … so … you do the math
Don't think ivev seen this, good one
The chopper’s on me. Have you talkin real peaceful when THAT’s raised
Trust me you don’t want this catering… what’ll happen next is in baaad taste
Ok, catering was good wp but flip was alright nothing wild to me..
I’ll put the piece between ur eyes…. goin crazy with the can
Point blank - the muzzles touch’n the middle of a noodle… that’s Lady & the Tramp
muzzle part made this good here
& soon as it start, it’s hopeless. I aim for the eyes – that mark’s a bonus
Pops Ridalin ya body w/ bullets… you gonna find it real hard to Focus
Ehh ok ender
are you sure you’re actually a teacher?! i mean…
sure you got by Aero, but now i’m here to cause a scene
so much evidence u ‘Took the Bar to get Acclaim’ i swear u got a Law Degree
creative opener..
wtf at those votes, robbery! & i could care less if you hate me
if i put you ‘next to ‘Aer'n Judge, u dont Measure Up’.. ur the rest of the Yankees
This was cool too.. took me a sec
real talk he carries YOU, every tag battle = an unsightly scene
Errol get the Win as your punches fail to connect.. change ya name to Mickey G.
Ok reference looked up but not true to me tbh.. ok
for years Dom has said my work is A+ & all he’s ever called me is fly
it’s funny, i’d give em a Deify had to rate em & i’m basically a God to the guy
worded well... good nothing else to say here
Dom the emotional faggit! an Aussie that falls harddd & throws wifey eyes
the type to take ‘Getting Tail to Heart’ just to leave w/ it Broken like the Crikey Guy
Lol i liked the concept but broken part was iffy to me
stay in hiding or i’m shootin’ at ya eyes while i grip the rubber
i'll ‘PopSockets & be Attached to a Case’ boooyyy you better Stick to Cover
Not a fan of this one
bro, ur from the Sunshine Coast wont even put the pump to you fam
put a blade in ur ribs & 'Break it Off, Inside U' like one of ur students dumping her man
hmmm its alright a bit too specific.. inside u
he's mad in fear. Dom went from being savage to the average tier
so it'll be funny iffy drops, knowing those are the only kind that he’s had in years
ok, phlymo did this way back it's ok/decent
Blue started off good but seemed like he tried to reach for personal angles esp towards the end but he certainly had hitters.. first two.. deify etc.. Dom kept it consistent here even w/ the gunbars.. they were still direct & good tho usually I'll take a personal flipped creatively over it.. but Blue didn't really hit w/ me there imo not sure why i think the bars had alot going on but the concepts as a whole werent registering w/ me as damn..dope'.. Dom did that a lil better i thought this go round..
vote DOM
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