Plot steadily improving. Nothing wrong here bar a slightly stale concept. But thats unlucky sometimes it's hard to know what's going to be fresh. Liked jabs. Wasn't his best. Rather simple. But fresh and worked.
Its simplicity was in its favor I think.
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Originally Posted by El Muffin
Jay Welsh took your lunch money
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
Flow....that punch was disgusting. Mvgt Flow
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