saying "points poke at his stomach" is a good connection to the pillsbury dough boy but it doesn't seem like a reasonable gunbar, nobody threatens to poke your stomach with bullets but i enjoyed the creative attempt nonetheless.
saying ur going to bring the jungle to him was kinda interesting but im not sure i liked it, also the connection wasn't even that relevant to the punch, they were almost both very simple and avg bars on their own, i will give you an ok for the attempt and creativity though.
well, i did not enjoy either bar that much but im going to edge suth cuz i thought it was funny.
v/ suth
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