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Old 03-27-2019, 03:38 AM   #4
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Wise, I always enjoy the ride. It's psychedelic and holistic. I like the fast-paced rhythm and it almost activates dopamine surges when consuming it. You bring multiple thought streams into one being, but also it appears a bit frantic upon bird's eyeview. That being stylistically it is done well, and it is not nonsensical. There was another frequent open mic writer who wrote in a similar fashion, but it was more scattered brain and while cool in the concepts he would bring together, it had little meaning so it was just a flurry of words. This while has some scattered elements to it, is cohesive in some form or another. Thanks.
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