Max came solid here. I think the bitch drooling over spit was worded fairly clean. “Drooling over spit” works better in the females drooling over him meaning. For the dog drooling meaning the wording isn’t as clean but it’s only a minor issue. My biggest issue with this bar is just that it’s a bit too elementary. Haven’t seen any spit battles so I haven’t seen too many spit flips but I’m assuming this one has to be the most obvious and used flips. Overall I got this bar hitting though, just saying that as constructive feedback.
Spi, that apk word play was slick af imo. You set up the punch fairly well besides moving like a slow jam was an awkward phrase. But I still think it was a good set up because it was so concise. Like I said the apk flip was dope af. I think you coulda ended it stronger than “get with the program” though. It does tie back in to the wp, but it’s another one of the instances where it works better one way than the other. Overall I think this was a pretty nice bar bro.
I think both had strong punches but Spit took this one with his creativity and clever wp.
Mvgt Spit
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