blue:
dope the straw stuck in a fish was a hot line, all in all real tight.. structure was clean but what shone was your vocab, very nice use of metaphores and real life narative.. dope piece dude flow hot to.. keep it up
blas:
very emotionally driven, it has alot of heart, really dug this piece.. structure tight but still loose to move around in.. very clean with a bit of a punchy outcome.. seems like a through and through verse with a personal element to it..
vote = blue bayou
for more constructed vocab, higher usage.. dope battle guys g/l
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