Y’all gassed this artifact but I brought a colossal tool,
& after these shots ‘rock his body’...they’ll be coal miners digging for fossil fuel
The concept is really good. Execution is OK but could be stronger
I mean honestly...did y’all notice that Res is tenser?
Cuz he knows I’ma put a ‘handful of rounds down his throat’ like a pez dispenser
Hmmmm OK. Using "rounds" for candies is a bit of a stretch, even if they are round candies
Class is in session...let me explain how history goes,
U’ll get the ‘long nose’ or I can put the ‘deuces in the air’...Nixon’s victory pose
Nice! Like this one
Mystery close. All I do is clap guys. U’ll say I rap lies,
But if I go ‘overboard w/ gun bars’...then U should be worried about the capsize
Capsize wp has been done, but this is done differently and it's a very relevant concept. This was good.
So much water...he got baptize. Now I’m coastin thru,
Nozzle in hand…& after I wet up his home...he’ll be able sell it w/a ocean view
Nahh. I see all the connections to wet/water but they don't gel together well enough to impress me, and 'be able to sell it with an ocean view' was a meh flip
I collect skeletons while skin is scorching on the bone,
So when I say I gotta ‘Mic hangin in my closet’...I’m not recording in my home
Nah. Mic np/wp is very old and done, also who would record in their closet? Not feeling this one
U been workin at this for a grip & got hired to be shot,
But if this ‘promotions’ for his gun...then u know mine will get ‘fired on the spot’
Promotion/fired on the spot connection was a good concept, think the execution coulda been stronger but still liked it
Ur hoe’s a magic trick. She on the wood...log sports,
My nigga she let me ‘run thru the walls’ like trying to board a train to Hogwarts
LoL cool. Dug this.
How can I be stump? U’ll see me dump for free punk,
If u try & branch out...my bullets will ‘ring inside u’ like the interior of a tree trunk
Heh, cool. I would've opted for a better set up to the 'branch out' connection rather than gone for the multis in the set up
This icon will fadeaway...there’s no reversal compared,
Cuz if anybody ‘wanna be like Mike’...it was the year the commercial was aired
Nah. Too simple and obvious
fire off in ya buildin: the 5 alarm ya crew.
propellin: see wat tha choppa do..
Get sprayed: ima binaca u.. banana clip: crescent moon to ur gut make u do a kamala move.
Trying for a autotune 2.0 bar eyyyy? I had to look up binaca and kamala but it's cool
Now shut the helll up, cunttt.. you won’t be able to rally nerd..
-like, -like, -like.. are those concepts or are we listenin to a fuckn valley girl.
Sick. The punch concept is fresh and relevant and this was executed very well. That's a heavy hit
Left u in an alley, curled.. it’s endin with screams when i send u the beams.
bump stock.. when i put two in this Snatch it aint a pregnancy screen.
decent np
You flip Rum Nitty lines.. bitch what u coppin aint tight..
when u stop in & write, 5 second rule: we already got the drop on that bite.
heh, that's pretty good, creative flip
U dont carry the weight just be honest bitch, but i promise this..
Body will lose lil by lil.. so consider each line here as a fuckn progress pic.
Cool, not bad
& we can go hand to hand before I mass shoot ur core..
a swift hook’ll leave u with such a spinning globe u can be classroom decor.
Eh, okay. Creative but neither the wp nor the flip were super good
I’m too old for this shit but i can still tell that ur a weaker opponent..
headshot left ur mind blank: now u can relate with that senior moment.
Nahhh
mann u aint grippin.. gun talk is ur clutch & it’s apparent kid..
so when you draww.. all that shit’s doing is gettin hung up on ur parent’s fridge.
Lol. Liked this. Maybe set up coulda been better with something about him being a child besides just calling him kid
Break every damn bone in ur set.. u wish u were feelin numb now..
push em down the stairs.. now Body lookin like he’s mirrored at a funhouse.
ehh it's ok. Creative but not much else
Tha squad comin to eatt, faggot.. just sum drastic brutes who aint afraid to shoot..
see us centerpieces at ya table.. then give ur whole family the fuckin plastic fruit.
Strong closer. Good wp connection
Both had a couple really good bars and a fair number of decent ones. My decision is mostly about the strength of the ones I wasn't feeling so much - Res had one bar that was a definite nope for me and a couple others I thought were meh but creative at least, wheras Body had 3 I thought were definite nopes. Res also has the LOTB to me in valley girl. Good stuff fellas.
V/ Res
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