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Old 03-06-2019, 06:10 PM   #464
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Bonjour, monsieur!
I analyse the passers by walking on the pier
The black and white patterned stripe uniformity is clear,
but not all is as appears.
There’s a contrast beyond that of our tourists souvenirs.
A deep disparity between the family you can see unravelling,

The love is gone.
It’s sauvignon blanc that kisses her lips in the middle of dinner,

No ring on her finger.

Rosé tinted glasses and faux-fait interaction

Au revoir to the olive gardens and croissant bars.

I’d only really got as far as odd snippets like that at that point haha! I hadn’t even begun putting them together. Just odd musings and pairings of ideas I liked.

Guess I’ll sit this one out.
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