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Old 06-10-2013, 03:43 PM   #4
Sharp
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I'm going to cause you so much damage the doctors will be calling you a cabbage
I'll leave this pussy flat lined and bleeding so bad this battle will be referred to as miscarriage
okay, basic excecution
Your concepts so outdated your bars sound like they were made on an anvil
It will only be after your dead people will tell there kids "he's one to watch" like Jimmy Saville
pretty statmentish but alright
Shit I ain't even trying, I know your verse will be whack and I no for a fact I'll be right
Your the type to put up about as much fight as mimics grandad did against the light
meh
Beat babbling babies battling by bashing baby battlers brains before boasting
^^^everything started with B, ironically... more interesting then anything I see you posting
if the 'b' thing was flipped harder it couldve been okay, kind of an older thing but not bad. came out statementish though



he a flamer with ass burns living for sack and shaft
dudes explode on his spine, now he gotta back draft
almost alright, WP wasnt too strong
no bitches, game or style, just blame your brain-flow
the only M.s. you fuckin with is THAT disease though
nice idea, but the wp doesnt really work. MS is pronounced M-S while Ms. is miz... didnt quite work
british sophistication ain't real like a full vulture
'cause cutting that cancer off your face the only time you have culture
good ammo selection, not too well done
believing he smashes pussy is dumber than hick religions
'cause
Reelin' more poop decks than gay fishermen under sick pigeons
no


@siculu youre actually in a good spot for a newb. clearly have been reading battles, getting a good handle on text. keep at it, check the tutoring section and HMU if you have any questions. flo was mad rushed but the first bar was his best idea, lotb but not by much, so he barely edges it here

v/flo

dont always sleep on new guys tho lol, he almost had you imo
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